Weeping

and swinging

emotions

swaying

winds and self

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One Response to “Weeping”

  1. Hi, nice blog. If you’re interested, check out my favorite poetry blog Poetmeister…on the road to Parnassus! I just bumped you out of the “reading cycle” at Alpha Inventions..:) It’s a pretty kewl invention, no?

    “Weeping” has a very easy flow to it, and I wouldn’t associate weeping with the words, more like “mood swings” or something. I “see” weeping more like drops of words, i.e.,

    Weeping
    and
    swing-
    ing
    emotions
    .
    .
    sway-
    ing
    .
    .
    winds
    .
    and
    .
    .
    .
    self.

    Or, something like that, if it makes sense to you, that is. lol. I love it regardless of what you do with it..

    PuC

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